One of my task for homework was to create a google drawing of my dream house. I had to imagine I had 2 million dollars and my choice was to build my own Dream House! After I had completed my Dream House I needed to write an explanation about it. Have a look!
Over Here is my Amazing Dream House and down below is my explanation.
Hi Nia
ReplyDeleteI love the use of colour and you always finish your work to a high standard. Your right - you do have an AMAZING dream house. Maybe go through your writing because I have noticed some mistakes. Besides that the rest is fantastic!
Thank you Amy
ReplyDeleteIs my mistake in my dream house explanation? because I read through my writing above the google drawing and its fine. Thank you for the positive comment.